I really liked this beginning of the story in this dark, intriguing universe. I had the urge to read the sequel which is a good sign. I like the idea of an interactive story. Good job so far.
the " look inside the boxes" option made me so sad poor Lon u.u , i kinda expected something like that on the " follow the girl" option but even then it still managed to make me feel sad for her
As a distinguished critic I must say this small game has been a pleasant surprise. The story is very detailed, and the language used really gives the feel of an actual novel. So far, the choices you make don't seem to have that great of an impact, you either do something or don't, I really hope the developers expand on this as they go forward. 9/10
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I liked the way I can choose story path. That possibility made me restart the game for discover other parts of the story.
quite an intriguing beginning, looking forward to see how things will develop in the future ♡~
Everyone has a story - his story
the " look inside the boxes" option made me so sad poor Lon u.u , i kinda expected something like that on the " follow the girl" option but even then it still managed to make me feel sad for her
I hope there's a continuation cuz this is great!
Aw such a captivating piece of art, loved it! <3
I love this so much!! The story is so captivating and I would highly recommend reading it
Wow, i like the story so much
As a distinguished critic I must say this small game has been a pleasant surprise.
The story is very detailed, and the language used really gives the feel of an actual novel. So far, the choices you make don't seem to have that great of an impact, you either do something or don't, I really hope the developers expand on this as they go forward.
9/10
A sad but also very intriguing story, I wish there was more to read about it. I really enjoyed it, good work!
Great story telling, also very cool how there are multiple endings
lovely game <333